Friday, November 11, 2016

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Oh you there, you who loathe someone somewhere
Why carry the black beast on your shoulders
When on your left breast there is a fountain?
Fill it to the brim with the essence of love instead
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Aminath Neena
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Hans Vr 11 November 2016

A superb poem with a fantastic message. I love this kind of poems with so much wisdom in them This one in particular is very well written and so true. Love runs through our veins. We never have a shortage of it if we look inside We can give endlessly from it and we better do it today... Love this poem with my whole heart.

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Aminath Neena Haneef 12 November 2016

Thank you so much for this comment.

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