Not Peace But A Sword Comments

Well wrtien man, should send this to the Church........Pope? have a nice day dave

Bob, Your faith is strong and I commend you greatly... From your poem: 'But you don’t have to fear the sword, if you will accept Christ as Lord' I find your message jaded, narrow and threatening as it leaves little room for the other 6 billion of us walking around on this planet that do not embrace Christianity. I ask not for your pity or prayers...only tolerance and understanding. No offense meant, Ray

Enjoyable. Beautifully told. I'm not so sure about the constant use of the word 'many' - there are alternatives: mind you, a great poem!