Not Necessarily... Comments

Great poem Jacqui, really captures the feeling of a passive existence. Sometimes we all drift on autopilot, allowing ourselves to be carried along by life. I like it.

great poem again Jacqueline, , , ,

Yeah, truly said... Its not necessary that we want things the way they are happening... Wonderful write :)

Such a stunning poem, You never cease to amaze jacqui. :)

Howdy Jacqueline! Hey Your phenomenal personal touch and plethora feeling can deal with any heart..... Your words can heal any wounds. I hail these poetic lines...... 'Air escapes my nose. It's not necessary, but nonetheless it does...' Moreover, every line in the poem is special as the words of Swami Vivekananda.............. :) :) take the smiles I give you take the garland I give you but never take my life even if give you.. Ha! Ha! (Just if it's time for humor)

Very interesting, well written lady Broad, I would also want to conclude that eyes view me the unseen not nessecary, because I want to, but because I want them to steal way beyond the unseen. Nice piece there

I love the meaning and deepness yet simplicity of this poem...good write -SG

You use all things that you feel that you have to talk something true in you..Bravo Jacqui! _Unwritten Soul

Very very powerful, a great poem.