Not My Heart Comments

reading these line made me to write this dont try to cheat me though there is no one with us who owns the moon and the sun be sure my heart to you is as wall it wont be open any time to your call

At least you have said 'darling' at the end. That should please him.

That's okay! A fair warning it seems! Heartuest congratulations on your poem's selection as the 'Member Poem of the Day'!

That's okay! A fair warning it seems! Heartiest congratulations on your poem's selection as the 'Member Poem of the Day'!

I you want to come I let you come but not to me I let you come to see the wall which I built for you to see the thorns which I care on the rose garden to see the fire flame which I burnt for your coming path because when I wanted to give my whole you then you went to another and now when the expected one has gone then you want to come to me So I no need you I am good alone

Here, Look I am good alone The entire nature is my friend The butterfly, bee, flowering mountain, the crystal fountain all are my friend I am alone good with them

Look I am good in this garden of love in this world, tranquilized breeze, rhythmic flowing river, in this melodious tone of cowboys flute, birds chirping in this monsoon rains, falling snowy evening, I am good alone No, do not need No, do not need your warmth kiss, hug Do not need your rosy night, moonlit bed Do not need your candle light fragrant room

See I have built walls so high, That no one can get past. So, don't give me your heart, Beacause darling, I won't give you mine; .....oh the great walls in the mind kingdom barricades to meet with love cause some distrust and misunderstanding. Sometimes I feel like that the some sill matter breaks the good relations. Whatever; this is good poem on heartbreaking love...congrats for being selected again this poem as POD

Sad but strong poem from a woman's heartfelt words. Congratulations on " Poem of the Day" .

Great poem. She just needs a " Man from Africa" like me who knows how to drill under the wall and steal her heart. Any one remembers the movie. Them ladies can write poetry. Guys?

Very heartfelt with strong emotions...........

wow that's really stunning..! ! Absolutely loved it, i'm write as well, this one amazing.

Beautiful sensational poem..... wonderful

Beautiful and lovely flow of words. Thanks for sharing such a beautiful poem.

Many congratulations for this wonderful poem being selected as Poem of the Day!

How She Can Live With No Love (By Akhtar Jawad) (Congrats! Your poem touched my heart and it reacted through this poem.)

Being deceived in love a heart reacts, It builds a wall and thinks it’s now packed, But love never dies and it slowly acts, By passage of time the wall is cracked.

Love continues its repeated hammering, The crack is widened in a broad windows, A love song once again, sweet murmuring, She looks at her own dancing shadows.

She snatches the hammer from her heart, Widens the windows in an open door, Before going out see her dressing art, “I am still beautiful, can dance on the floor! ”

In the arms of another broken heart, Smiling, dancing, dreaming a true mate, God! Bless her with a flower, not a thwart, Change her thoughts and change her fate!