Sunday, August 28, 2016

Not Mine Comments

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You remind me of my pain
you make me act so insane
Due to the one who left me disdained
But you're not mine
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Stella Allou
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Hassan Hayati 11 November 2017

this poem is very touching. Ziba= means pretty in Persian my mother tongue.

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Stella Allou 17 October 2016

fanx so much for making time to read

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Allotey Abossey 05 October 2016

It's beautifully written and well articulated. I love the organization and tone of write. Good work my dear.

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Wes Vogler 01 September 2016

Roulette is my game and I wear a silver necklace placed there by my grand daughter (age 4) I enjoyed the read

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Stella Allou 03 September 2016

i appreciate it sir....thank you

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