We, the human beings;
The god's most precious creation.
The lamp bearers of the mother earth.
Yes, undoubtedly we are! !
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Hello Vaibhav.. you think deep and write very serious thought provoking ones aren't you? .. lately I have been staying away from thought provoking pieces and reading love poems..they ease the tension! ! .... but you do write good! ! ! ! .... Make the reader think and arouses the reader's mind's eye... great work....quite a philosopher aren't you...? 10++ cheers shan
Stunning work, from one of the finest poets i have the pleasure of knowing.10+
A thought provoking poem about life and humanity and the obligation of all of us to take care of 'god's most precious creation' - mother earth. Your express your angst with great poetic flare. Your poem will surely make a difference. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
not questions but answers we need.....but before anyone answers that..too bad we all have our greed to feed........well penned
Good one...very intense and intriguing, shall wait and see until the next turn of tide, if things take a better turn....or is it already time that we joined hands towards the better future......? ? ? ? ? ? ? ?
Very intence write filled with many questions of life..... Very powerfull, and with much depth... bonnie
A very thought provoking poem that raises many questions. Excellent work. Best wishes, Andrew
these are not mere questions, they are begging for answers, HOW ABOUT BEGINNING WITH OURSAELVES. lovely and sensitive. there is hope if all of us reflect on these...10 mamta
humanity becomes the first casuality..if ego upholds its superiority..becoming humble is even considered to be a stumble..lovely poem on what things are heading to
Very wise questions. Now if we only had answers! A plea to save our beautiful earth. May your voice be heard. I particularly like the first stanza. Let us all be lamp bearers.10, of course. Warm regards, Sandra
they cease to be questions, vaibhav...just statements each one of us has to think of...
The more technologically we become...the less we pay regard to common sense...and it is common sense, that got man this far in time...Sometimes old-school habits, and a bit 'o TLC...can go a long way, when it comes to the most important slsments in our lives...like our land, and the air we breathe...Ypou are accurate in stating that your questions are not questions at all...They are facts, that are IN question! Solid Write. F j R 2009
The questions are essentially all the same. As are the answers. The answers are all yes. So, let us change the querstions that we may receive better answers to our plight. GW62
the souls are reaching to mother earth since the begining of our birth. there is truely a connection.
Vaibhav, Questions are soul stirring. There is an Urdu couple that goes something like this: What a strange relation between the body and the soul? Both lived together the whole life but never had a dialogue. Such dialogues are very essential for the personal as well as social health. Thank you for raising this question. CP
good questions you ask, Vaibhav...good concern over ecology and earth...impressive write..10
Very good subject, very well dealt with. These are the questions we should put to ourselves as well as ask others, bringing out the awareness in the worl. Poets are meant for that, not looking for results or quantum of effects.....very well done.
Fine thought out vaibhab! Its human wisdom to bring out answer! sometime things happen and we are questioned - why God's actions coming not? I think, things are relative and there are laws! so many times we do not see 'direct action'! 10+