Wednesday, October 24, 2012

Not Meant To Be Comments

Rating: 4.5

Strange emptiness fills my heart,
as finally lost; the charm of the cupids dart.
I knew this all along with fear,
that this fateful day was coming near.
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Hans Vr 02 November 2012

Being let down by someone we truly trusted can be so devasating, but you are very right to dump your sorrows in the salty bay. Most of our big sorrows in the relatively distant past have turned out to be blessings in disguise. So, yes, shed the tears, live through sadness but somewhere deep inside, keep the conviction that the future will be very different. I like this poem very much. Excellent

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Asif Andalib 02 November 2012

Well done Ancita. I like it

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Yash Shinde 02 November 2012

excellent...........bit of imagery....great idea beautiful execution agreat message of hope :)

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Sheryl Martin 24 October 2012

can really relate love it

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