Monday, January 11, 2021

Not Love-Shy, But Clumsy Comments

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I don't love well
I'm too kind...
The type easily blind,
The kind:
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kyvin Nash
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Dr Dillip K Swain 09 May 2021

The poet has very explicitly divulged his weakness... brilliant

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kyvin nash 08 April 2021

Thank you for votes and comments my P.H friends, I'm inspired and encouraged, to write well and best...sorry for replies, I've tried but they're not going through!

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Deluke Muwanigwa 27 March 2021

Great words. Keep practice you will fall nicely in love

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Bri Edwards 17 January 2021

Gee, Kyvin, if you reacted, as illustrated, to a love-move from me, i think i'd run very quickly from the area, empty-handed and forlorn. : ) bri

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Captain Cur 15 January 2021

No stranger am I to your wise words above. Well written.

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kyvin nash 18 January 2021

That's motivation Captain... Thanks a lot!

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Varsha M 11 January 2021

Yes you reflected a very important topic on love...yes in love we lose our control over self but don't make such blind thst fails see the truth...i agree with this notion. Thank-you for sharing.

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kyvin nash 12 January 2021

Indeed Varsha M, thanks a lot for reading! ! !

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Kostas Lagos 11 January 2021

Good poem! Really good!

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kyvin nash 12 January 2021

Thanks a lot Kostas Lagos...appreciated!

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