Not Love At All Comments

Don't bother - beauty is only skin-deep. And this world's but a stage. People walk in to exit after delivering what they are pre-destined to deliver. Your love will surely find a way. You portray the characteristic impatience of your age - nevertheless that is also what makes the days of youth so vivacious. That you have taken to lyrics to express your agonies and ecstasies is commendable from the old-world point of view as is mine. May I ask you to be a bit more careful about your spellings and grammar? I am not asking you to compromise with your very own poetic liberty. Hope you accept this criticism from an old man with grace.

After reading Ms.Ferguson's bio, i guess it must be charthartic to write and share your emotions on such a painfull subject.I guess i've been there and done that-as well.Ive read a lot of poems on this 'love lost' subject and i give each my full attention and respect.The structure is understandably a little loose here, but i got a kick out of the 'little person' comment toward the end. Sounds.like it, yes!