Tuesday, October 16, 2018

Not Long Enough Be Death Comments

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under the lych-gate shall I pass
before the wait in holding hands
for the robed man of God to steer
me to my resting days
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Clive Culverhouse
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Clive Culverhouse 05 December 2020

I put this poem on the Write Out Loud poetry website Here's a comment about my poem " This poem must rank with one of the best I have read this year as it takes us from our mortality to our eternal home with all its consequences. This is a literary achievement. Thank you for this"

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Clive Culverhouse 13 December 2020

Another comment from WOL " what is our eternal home. Is it the womb or the stars in the heavens"

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George Krokos 16 October 2018

A great poem to read and well written.

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Clive Culverhouse 16 October 2018

Thanks for your comment, George, much appreciated., .

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