Wednesday, February 3, 2010

Not Just Words Comments

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I don’t mean to say what sometimes splashes out of my mouth
I don’t mean to say all those un-worthy words

I don’t!
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Noorie Ali
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James S Newcomb Lang 04 February 2010

Thank you for asking me to comment on this angry piece of work. It seemed to me as though it was written in haste and not fully thought through though. That is not necessarily a criticism, but an observation, as sometimes the heart felt work is just put down on paper and allowed to flow.

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