Tuesday, May 26, 2009

Not Just The Wine Comments

Rating: 5.0

my longing eyes are deeply staring
at the lying empty bottles of wine
and not so far away, is a misty glass
in it, is a chunk of haply floating diamond
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Ayi Escalona
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Prince Obed de la Cruz 19 June 2010

'there are stars produced in the air' this i think is the most interesting line here... really poetic!

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Catrina Heart 25 November 2009

wonderful poem shared here...nice wordings and flow...cute ending! ! !

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John Shea 02 November 2009

I love to drink wine and really hate to wake up during a great dream.Really can relate.Pizza and wine really gets me started.

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Moonbee Canady 28 October 2009

Very Good Write... Good Descriptive Words, Good Visual of a Guy with a Hangover... We kinda have the same take on the topic... check out my poem: 'Red Sparkling Wine' ... (told you it was similar - smile) ... MoonBee

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 26 October 2009

when the silver curtain breaks….. she came running with open arms these lines have life. beautiful. shan

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Lady Grace 23 August 2009

wait..dont wake me..naa pa bay tuba? ..waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa....murag pantinig...aw lampinig diay...tagay pa, , hasta malipong..maynoon...musalom na sa sugong kay kaingon ug naay giandam nga tughong..waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

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Ashraful Musaddeq 26 May 2009

Sweet poem with cute ending,10++

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