my longing eyes are deeply staring
at the lying empty bottles of wine
and not so far away, is a misty glass
in it, is a chunk of haply floating diamond
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wonderful poem shared here...nice wordings and flow...cute ending! ! !
I love to drink wine and really hate to wake up during a great dream.Really can relate.Pizza and wine really gets me started.
Very Good Write... Good Descriptive Words, Good Visual of a Guy with a Hangover... We kinda have the same take on the topic... check out my poem: 'Red Sparkling Wine' ... (told you it was similar - smile) ... MoonBee
when the silver curtain breaks….. she came running with open arms these lines have life. beautiful. shan
wait..dont wake me..naa pa bay tuba? ..waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa....murag pantinig...aw lampinig diay...tagay pa, , hasta malipong..maynoon...musalom na sa sugong kay kaingon ug naay giandam nga tughong..waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
'there are stars produced in the air' this i think is the most interesting line here... really poetic!