Tuesday, November 25, 2008

Not Just A Memory Comments

Rating: 3.5

The droplets that fall one by one from the sky touching the land
Remind me of the precious memory we own
Memory of our emotion we keep inside
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Brianna Trombley 09 December 2008

comparing the flow of water to memory, brilliant write, and memories are never jest memories, most times they are so much more

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Naru Kaede 09 December 2008

Wow, this is very good poem, Yes, memory it's not noly a memory, You write it so well and I can feel the step in every line, You did so good, , Naru Kaede,

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 30 November 2008

Memories never die, it'd linger in your system as long as you live.Good works Mornin Star.Keep writin.

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