Monday, November 4, 2019

Not If But When Comments

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Time was when they used to assist man,
Helping with his chores much as they can,
But times are changing fast,
Man's goose cooked, die is cast,
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Aniruddha Pathak
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Susan Williams 10 November 2019

there is a lot we will miss as we grow older in this internet world- manners, a correlation between hard work and reward, interest in others, etc. Good write!

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Aniruddha Pathak 10 November 2019

Yes, your observations are to the point and relevant. Thanks for visiting this ditty.

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Edward Kofi Louis 04 November 2019

Changes and challenges! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Aniruddha Pathak 04 November 2019

Thanks for visiting and you're right: changes come with challenges.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 04 November 2019

how well you say TIME CHANGES YOUR BEST FRIEND BEST SPIRITUALIST ONLY HAD ME BRANDED AS NON SPIRITUAL ONLY LABELLED AS ATHEIST AND BLOCKED ME SO THAT I COULD NOT REPLY PPME IS an ALL MAN POETRY COMPOSER as and when PPME CAN

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Aniruddha Pathak 04 November 2019

as and when PPME CAN (Report) ... Yes indeed, that is the spirit. Thanks for the feedback.

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