Thursday, October 30, 2014

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Rating: 4.8

Just another way
to frustrate me

Just another way
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Frank Avon
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electrokate 11 July 2018

found this by searching for the error... a nice break from the rabbit hole. :)

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Dheeraj 09 March 2018

futurityobscurity apps? perhaps. I'm from another age - the Age of the Page. Loved your poem. The same problem I feel with this modern generation where people learn C, C++ language before learning basic language. I'm not a critic of technology but because of it's overdevelopment, people are losing basic morality and philosophy of life. (10) +++.

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Pamela Sinicrope 12 September 2015

Hmmm. I like this poem. I had to think a moment. The cute couplets and rhythm belied some of the deeper meaning. I like the couplet, What I hear (spun in the print) / What I don't (silence in the margin) .... I'll chew on that for a while...lovely! ..... Silence in the print! My iPhone changed my words yet again... Maybe that could be in your poems! ;)

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Katelin Taylor 16 March 2015

I'm officially a fan, Frank. Your rhythm is fantastic and your writing is crisp, lighthearted, and witty. Again thank you for writing, and please visit my own page if you will.

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Kim Barney 30 December 2014

This is hilarious and is how all of us feel at times when the system crashes. There must not be any real men running the system there in Paris (at least who can read English) , because they always choose the same poems as poems of the day year after year.

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Daniel Brick 04 November 2014

Hi Frank You obviously got some relief from writing this gem of sarcasm and I got relief by reading it. It's deeply unfortunate that PH cannot adjust its technology or buy new and better machines to solve the problem. Somedays when 3,4 6 or more messages fail to deliver, I feel like bumping my head on a brick wall. Your poem carries just the right tone of sarcasm.

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