Monday, August 22, 2016
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A mother holds her child's hand, walking stealthy,
For the heat have their feet scorched,
Everything burns, the sand too,
The little one's feet are swollen, staring....
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7/24/2025 6:23:51 PM # 1.0.0
Shoes as a symbol of wealth and equality do a great job of making the issue tangible for the reader. The expression in your writing brings a nice level of sensitivity and the narration of the perspective from mother and child pulls at the reader's heartstrings as well as awareness. I like the way you pull in color, colloquial expression, and dialogue. Thanks for sharing your work.
Thank you so much Pamela for your encouraging and wonderful comment...am humbled