Wednesday, July 25, 2007

Not For Me Comments

Rating: 5.0

Sometimes, a conscious effort must be made
To remind myself a poem is not for me
When I read them..they appeal to my heart
And let me feel the way I'd like to be
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Dee Daffodil
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Zen Bojczuk 27 July 2007

Hey Dee... I just remembered. When I first joined PH and started finding amazing poems. I stumbled into your poetry. One of the first poems I wrote this year was 'Poets'. You were definitely one of those poets... my line 'Some seductively set you up and then bite' was a direct result of having read your poem 'The Date' Parts I and II. Bet there are elements of you and inspirations from you in many poems. I am absolutely sure that many have gotten lost in your poems and needed to remind themselves your poems were for someone else. Zen

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Zen Bojczuk 27 July 2007

I really, really like this poem. Did you write it for me? LOL. Joking aside, I have felt the same way about certain poems. I knew they weren't written for me... but I so which they had been. A beautiful surise is not for just for two lovers alone.. its there for you and me and others too... just like poetry. Zen

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Barry Van Allen 27 July 2007

Dee, Perhaps it is part of the allure, like any good magic - smoke and mirrors, hardly ever show the truth ... in the end , it is the deception that we love. B.V.A.

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Lee Degnan 26 July 2007

Maybe the poet knows your heart... it's what a poet knows. I like this flowing, catchy poem. Great job! Hugs, Lee

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