Monday, October 21, 2013

Not For Me A Beautiful Woman Comments

Rating: 5.0

On the sitting room wall when I was a child
Was a reproduction of the Vermeer
'The Girl with the Pearl Earring'- by then
Not popularised in film and novel.
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Martin McLean
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Danny Draper 24 October 2013

This is a fine piece with wit and analogy in fine measure with sufficient of the ancients to be worldly but not forced. The culture and tone of the first and last stanzas won it for me.

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Karen Sinclair 23 October 2013

Very clever and intricate piece which I believe I can grasp. The beautiful lady gazing almost angelic with a scorn. She gave you the confidence to decide what you saw as beautiful. Right enjoyable write. Tyvm. Karen.

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