Thursday, September 4, 2008

Not For Me Comments

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Tempted to ask you your name,
to introduce myself to you,
give you a kiss on the cheek,
showing you my interest.
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Javier Falcon
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Sandra Fowler 15 September 2008

Your title sets the mood of your poem. Very poignant. Ten for your honesty and depth of feeling. Warm regards, Sandra

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Catherine Lindsey 15 September 2008

Oh Jay, this is so sad. It reminds me of that old saying, 'If you love someone, set them free, if they come back, they're yours, if they don't, they never were.' Gosh, I guess that leaves me pretty lonely for the rest of my life. How despairing. Take care Sweetheart, love, Catie :)

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Millie: willalwayshavehope! ! 08 September 2008

I agree with Tom, a very good piece, you write from your heart, and i love that about you

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Tom Balch 04 September 2008

This is a really great piece,10+ regards Tom

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Javier Falcon

Javier Falcon

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