Not For Long Comments

The rhymes are so beautiful, it's like reading a song. Life's hope in every strife.

A sweet, beautiful poem with positive thoughts. It's like a ray of light that removes darkness of despair and brings brightness of hope. Very well written,10/10!

life's too short, Geetima

Absolutely! The immense dark is the sign of recent morning! All the objects including life have two phases and both come alternative.

darkness rules over but not for long. good write.

Nice write, has the feeling of a collection of haikus.

A good optimistic poem. It wiil be very nice of you if you read and comment on my poem titled Ecstasy. Thanks.