An apple bored to just be hanging
had tried, through frequent heavy banging
to cut himself loose from the tree,
he wanted also to be free,
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Wow, such great writing and wonderful ryhme (thats most likely spelled wrong sorry) I loved this piece a lot! I'll save this page so I can read it a few more times haha. Great work. Loved it!
Interesting and a bit sad (for the apple, that is) . Sometimes we give up our lofty dreams to just be one of the bunch - and then find out it's not what we thought it would be. Simple and a pleasure to read. Thank you............. Linda
I really enjoyed this one, the apple knew of its true place in time no matter how absurd it's postion seemed, a great use of imagery and wording, Love Duncan
A good poem. This world need more humor. I liked thisl natshia
I enjoyed this write, brought a smile to my face. I like the meaning behind this, great write.
No Sherrie, you are still not seeing clearly. When I look at myself I see something I like. No need to start over, make over, fall over. So get over yourself and maybe, just maybe there is hope for you. H
I think this is a wonderful 're-birth' of the old 'apple don't fall far from the tree'........Great poem. Sincerely, Mary
Sherrie, I sense a good heart and/or soul somewhere. Is there something I can do to make it come out? H
SUCH WISDOM AND CREATIVITY IN THIS WELL PENNED VERSE THANKS FOR SHARING