Not Exact Fantasia Comments

‘…just silent viewer of what you can…’ Stay unidentified with the surrounding happenings. May be it is poet’s say as I understand. But to stay apathetic within milieu of Maya..? Readers reaction please Ten dr. sakti

you have a fine eye for observation and equally great quill for sharing your thoughts

hi! ! i like the way u play with the words... each line are well connected and expressed.. nice! ! =)

i like the way you have expressed your observations. makes one think.

I like it's metre and rhymes. Keep writing Sarwar!

Some understand some don't. To be honest, this poem is not my favorite, but I give it a well thought out 7! Keep making poems, the crowd loves you

um...Sarwar my friend What is this al about? i dont get it

good one.... i can get what you are trying to say.... thanks for sharing..