Monday, January 4, 2010

Not Everyone Was Born To Love Comments

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Not every one was born to love you
So I must tell you now that many will hurt you
Many will pass you by
And take your beautiful words as if your speaking lies
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Raymond Valadez
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Amy J-Jordan 05 February 2010

The sad thing is that you didn't write that poem for me. You're a wonderful writer and whoever you love I'm sure is very grateful to be with you.

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Cynthia Buhain-baello 04 January 2010

First I like the premise at the start of the poem, and the metamorphosis of your resolve throughout the succeeeding lines, and the final line effectively closing the whole poem like a ribbon. Crafty, cleverly written, brilliant presentation. Bravo!

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