Sunday, June 28, 2020

Not Enough Without Love Comments

Rating: 5.0

Sweetened fragrance flowing by the window
Night jasmine jogging, out of loving heart
Pond making sudden sounds of fish splashing
Nutmeg billing its charming fumes thru winds
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MAHTAB BANGALEE
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Britte Ninad 26 January 2021

sueprb fantastic imaginative crafting

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Dr Antony Theodore 26 November 2020

Dreamless heaven where the lutestring singing For the earthly fairy coming down words To recite life and death have enough penned But nothing is enough till hugging love Love, life and nature. thank you my dear Mahtab. tony

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Dr Antony Theodore 01 September 2020

Gold bangles rhyming with the buzzing bees Dreamless heaven where the lutestring singing For the earthly fairy coming down words To recite life and death have enough penned But nothing is enough till hugging love Great poetic expression. love, dreamless heaven, fairy, life and death, hugging l ove. very fine poem. tony

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Dr Antony Theodore 12 July 2020

Pens silence walking in the poet's lands Midnight moon blowing rainy jewel clone Mustard flowers calling the calm dawn sun Your smiling on that field greeting poems Flying there very near the cloudy breeze beautiful poetry my dear Mahtab. tony

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Susan Williams 03 July 2020

Sweetened fragrance flowing by the window/ Night jasmine jogging- - > mmmmm, I can almost smell the sweet fragrance of this poem! and I enjoyed right choice of verb for the jaunty jasmine's passing by the window! ! ! !

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Varsha M 01 July 2020

A beautiful poetic expression with all spices and natural sun light. Yes nothing is complete without a hugging love. Admirations.

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True, a meaningful poem very nicely penned.

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Edward Kofi Louis 30 June 2020

True love is the key! ! ! Better than anything. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Anjandev Roy 30 June 2020

....till hugging love.....meaningful.....anjandev roy.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 29 June 2020

A wonderfully scribed poetic expression. Simply astonishing....10++

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Sylvia Frances Chan 28 June 2020

WOW! Reading this I am in Fairytale land, der Mahtab, your poetic heart is creating this fascinating Song and when I am away from this lovely lyrical poem, I can still hear thge music from afar. OntoMyPoemsList this loveliest Tune still in June! Thank you for creating! 10++++

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keep on dreaming EKL IS also loving mb of bd

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Pallab Chaudhury 28 June 2020

Magic of love- well depicted.... Liked it... Well done... Stay safe

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Very beautifully penned 10++++

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Edward Kofi Louis 28 June 2020

Dreams of love! ! ! Better than anything. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Varsha M 28 June 2020

Beautiful penned words. Yes nothing is as good as hugged words. Well written poetry. Admirations.

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