Not Enough Time Comments

Deborah, you've got every reason to feel bitter about your upbringing and you don't need me to tell you this. I'd like to say 2 things to you: firstly good poetry, in my view, demands variety. This poem needs to be made more different from 'Remember? ' (with particular regard to the lines 'Remember mom...entire life') . Secondly, swap your anger for forgiveness. You'll live and love more happily. Best wishes, Gina.