Saturday, April 14, 2018

Not Enemy A Traditional Rival Comments

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I don't like to call you as my enemy
You are just my traditional rival
In love we both need a rivalry
For the sake of love and its survival!
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Akhtar Jawad
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Rose Marie Juan-austin 24 June 2018

What a beautiful character of a man has been depicted in this magnificent piece. A poem of friendship and harmony. Liked the last line of this brilliant write.10

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Perdita Young 15 April 2018

To express the love there are lovely ways! - To have a worthy rival is a great bliss that gives life a purpose and makes it more fruitful. Wonderful poem well penned.10++++++Perdita

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mahtab bangalee 15 April 2018

nice friendship is depicted here through the scene of cricket match

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Rini Shibu 14 April 2018

Wonderful poem about sports, enmity and love

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Robert Murray Smith 14 April 2018

Akhtar, sport can create enmity. Your poem says otherwise.

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Khalida Bano Ali 14 April 2018

All the lines of this lovely poem are beautiful but last line is a work of art!

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