Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Saturday, November 7, 2009

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What to remember and what to forget
Only you go near and beget
Eyes slowly raise level and meet
Head simply shakes and crumbles the feet
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
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bye bye... bye bye 14 December 2009

'... we are here to love and to be loved... ' Says it all... But who said it would be easy? (smile)

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Sunita Rao 11 December 2009

What to remember and what to forget Only you go near and beget Eyes slowly raise level and meet Head simply shakes and crumbles the feet

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george george 30 November 2009

Interesting poem to read. I especially like 'What is wrong if we couldn’t make in the end? Is it not the true feelings from the friend? ' A different take on love! Very good.

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Merna Ibrahim 29 November 2009

Simply Superb. This verse is really meaningful'To deceive somebody is not at all art'. Merna

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warner treuter 25 November 2009

love for awhile.......

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 09 November 2009

‘…Let love grow not fast as train but as cart…’ What starts fast ends in blast. LOL! Love is not soda water bottle, effervescently sprouting up to end in short lived and disappearing as ‘cold’ bubble lees. Ten++ niv Please grace with your comments &c to my posts [new too] niv

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Pitilosi Mdala 09 November 2009

nothing stops me from going to nature.man you're so wonderful

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Louis Rams 08 November 2009

love will reign supreme. a ten

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 08 November 2009

you deserve to stay so long in the top 500 poets

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Meggie Gultiano 07 November 2009

I shall greet the waves and not feel dismayed ........................................................... Thank you for this nice inspiring line..It deeply touched me, you have lifted up my soul..and yes..I will greet the waves, no matter what

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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