Friday, April 10, 2009

Not Drowning Comments

Rating: 5.0

I did not want to taste the salty sea
Just sample cool thrills on a far off beach
To celebrate a school trip nearly done
A tale I could relate once back at home
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Janet Budd
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thrilling and amazingly beautiful

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Christine Kerr 21 April 2009

I love the emotion that you captured here, That only comes from someone that has experienced some or most of the pain, to know how to pour it out and let it flow so beautifully. Thanks for sharing 10++

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Colin J... 21 April 2009

' Heart rip, soul rot, shock, spirit bitter burn Resilience seep, invisible weep, no way to turn' A very moving poem... Brillant... Colin J...

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Laurie Hill 10 April 2009

A most excellent, captivating read. Thoroughly engrossing and a wonderful write...10++

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Janet Budd

Janet Budd

Oldham, UK
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