Friday, February 13, 2009

Not Dead Yet Comments

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Looking from my coffin as we travel so slow
Look at them crying what do they know
I am happy in here it cosy you know
Middle of winter streets covered in snow
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John Mccudden
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Amy Douglass (Fifita) 22 February 2009

Nice wirte. It's a good and unique subject some of my stuff is about death but not about when I'm dead. good write.

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Stephen Stirk 13 February 2009

Bravo - Great I love a bit of satire, and really like the rhyme. I'm new on here, look me up some time Best Regards Steve

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