Tiptoeing like a curious child
across the waves of clouds
in the afternoon so proud
inviting me for a ride.
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Top score for the pic. But PoemHunter allows only one vote😀
A gem of a poem. Brilliant imagery: " sail across the sea of ecstasy meant only for me."…enjoyed. Top score
Lovely lovely words created by a lovely poetic mind! ! 5 stars and a fav
now that is the way to start a poem! ! ! Tiptoeing like a curious child across the waves of clouds
Tiptoeing like a curious child across the waves of clouds! .. Right from the start to the end such wonderful, wonderful imagery! ..
Beautifully written, beautiful imagery! .. Excellent to close our eyes and drift off into the adventure and fun! .. Again Awesome! .. Definite 5 Stars! ...+++++
A little deviation from the straight road, may be a discovery of treasures! Lovely!
Wonderful poem dear Varsha, filled with beautiful images and compelling rhyme.
I liked 'as horizon dons the clouds woven as the wedding gown'. : ) bri
I had to check 'tiptoeing or tiptoing' and i find 'tiptoing/tip-toing' not listed.
Another fascinating poem adorned with scintillating images and rhymes.
Wonderful thoughts packed in a beautifully crafted poem.
An awesome poem, which thrills the senses. Your imagery never fails to delight.
Road not taken always remains a mystery, Well written poem,5*****
The message the title conveys is superb. The bliss that we consider most private is never to be missed for it is a gift of God
2) I have the giglles since your end rhymes are so fascinatingly put..........OOPS! You were inspired by my new poem POETIC VISION? How adorable is that, I feel deeply honoured and flattered, thank you so much dear, you are oft so near (at my newest poems)
Great poem. Wonderful rhymes