Sunday, July 18, 2021

Not Always Straight Ways Are Right Comments

Rating: 5.0

Tiptoeing like a curious child
across the waves of clouds
in the afternoon so proud
inviting me for a ride.
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Varsha M
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Nastasimir Franovic 30 May 2023

Great poem. Wonderful rhymes

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Unnikrishnan E S 23 January 2022

Top score for the pic. But PoemHunter allows only one vote😀

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Unnikrishnan E S 23 January 2022

A gem of a poem. Brilliant imagery: " sail across the sea of ecstasy meant only for me."…enjoyed. Top score

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Varsha M 31 May 2023

Your words are encouraging

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Susan Williams 23 January 2022

Lovely lovely words created by a lovely poetic mind! ! 5 stars and a fav

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Susan Williams 23 January 2022

now that is the way to start a poem! ! ! Tiptoeing like a curious child across the waves of clouds

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Rebecca Navarre 28 September 2021

Tiptoeing like a curious child across the waves of clouds! .. Right from the start to the end such wonderful, wonderful imagery! ..

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Rebecca Navarre 28 September 2021

Beautifully written, beautiful imagery! .. Excellent to close our eyes and drift off into the adventure and fun! .. Again Awesome! .. Definite 5 Stars! ...+++++

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Lyn Paul 15 September 2021

Captivating poem Varsha. Thank you

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Dr Dillip K Swain 27 July 2021

A wonderful composition! !

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A little deviation from the straight road, may be a discovery of treasures! Lovely!

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Wonderful poem dear Varsha, filled with beautiful images and compelling rhyme.

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Bri Edwards 27 July 2021

I liked 'as horizon dons the clouds woven as the wedding gown'. : ) bri

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Bri Edwards 27 July 2021

I had to check 'tiptoeing or tiptoing' and i find 'tiptoing/tip-toing' not listed.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 22 July 2021

Another fascinating poem adorned with scintillating images and rhymes.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 22 July 2021

Wonderful thoughts packed in a beautifully crafted poem.

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 19 July 2021

An awesome poem, which thrills the senses. Your imagery never fails to delight.

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M Asim Nehal 18 July 2021

Road not taken always remains a mystery, Well written poem,5*****

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The message the title conveys is superb. The bliss that we consider most private is never to be missed for it is a gift of God

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 18 July 2021

Beautiful and passionate BRAVO! ! ! !

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Sylvia Frances Chan 18 July 2021

2) I have the giglles since your end rhymes are so fascinatingly put..........OOPS! You were inspired by my new poem POETIC VISION? How adorable is that, I feel deeply honoured and flattered, thank you so much dear, you are oft so near (at my newest poems)

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