Saturday, October 12, 2013

Not Alone Afterall Comments

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My pieces begin to shatter
after years of hard work,
my thoughts become a splatter
against the side of my brain.
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Sara Hol
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Sina Farajzadeh 16 December 2014

Hi. I think The last stanza best supports the title of the poem anbd gives hope. Thanks for sharing. I'd like to know your comments on my works too. Good luck.

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