Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Thursday, August 30, 2012

Not All May Be Comments

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Not all may be feeling same
But for that He is not to be blamed
Many God fathers have taken his place
For deprived people not to make chase
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 02 September 2012

Re: Not all may be (Score: 1) by nprimemin on Saturday, September 01,2012 (13: 21: 37) Questions the questions of our shortcomings and mortality. If only a sample Got a lot out of this one very thorough some typos but you did it proud Looking forward to reading more from you. Nelson

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 31 August 2012

Re: Not all may be (Score: 1) by induce on Friday, August 31,2012 (09: 02: 44) Jadia470au, 'I spend sleepless night when cry in bed All those years were ruthlessly led That cry from innocent people makes me restless So far I have lived with double face' This is just one stanza that stood out to me. It is very strong and meaningful in your context, I respect your words and the meaning I try to see, it does leave me with thought/s. keep penning, induce...andYe

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 30 August 2012

great job Lillie Mendez7 minutes ago nice poem! Comment +1 a poem of all

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 30 August 2012

Alan Green 'Guppyman'10 minutes ago the poet tells of no escape from a day of judgement

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 30 August 2012

Not all may be feeling same But for that He is not to be blamed

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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