Tuesday, September 6, 2016

Not All Is Lost Comments

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There's darkness, but not all is lost
The stars, the moon and the fireflies
Look how darkness helps them glow
Darkness, with its forbidding demeanor
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Nosheen Irfan
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Michael Hopkins 21 March 2023

Lovely poem. Well done NI

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Anjandev Roy 11 February 2023

Fabulous write......very optimistic indeed.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 31 August 2022

This is a poem of substance! I respect the core of this poem a lot. My pleasure revisiting this value laden piece! !

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Dr Dillip K Swain 20 July 2022

Be not afraid of the dark, O' my heart....great expression! I appreciate all your majestic poems. Keep it up!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 01 December 2021

It's another wonderful poem... adorable poetic expression...loved it

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Dr Dillip K Swain 15 August 2021

Optimism reflected in this beautiful poem is praiseworthy!

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Chinedu Dike 14 September 2020

A concise and insightful bit of verse. A beautiful creation.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 17 June 2019

The stars, the moon and the fireflies/Look how darkness helps them glow....I feel a different kind of spark here! You have captured a magnificent theme! I admire and appreciate the choice of diction! A beautiful poem.....10

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Vipin Parashar 04 September 2018

Amazing n beautiful contents........brings consolation n soothing effect to explore more

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Nothing is lost in this world unless we accept that. Very good lines. Inspiring poem.

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Leonardo Martinez 02 January 2018

Feel the breath of sleeping air Such memories makes me feel so much... Thank-you!

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Indira Renganathan 31 October 2017

Be not afraid of the dark, O' my heart Rather, feel the world's soul, deep inside Quiet descent of heavenly stillness, around Thoughtful, meaningful, spiritual, philosophical....all put in one in these lines...yes, darkness is not to be afraid of....rather darkness is the helper to seek the Light....excellent write...thank you

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Paul Reed 30 August 2017

I agree we should not be afraid of the dark, it can be restorative. I have great memoires of walking with our dog in dark fields under starlight when everyone else was indoors. Enjoyed this poem Nosheen.

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Dr Antony Theodore 07 April 2017

Light shines in darkness The fireflies, moon, stars forbidding demeanor of darkness, Be not afraid of the dark, O' my heart Rather, feel the world's soul, deep inside. Stillness, sleeping air, heart’s cries in prayer. You are growing everyday as a poet and as a master in Literature. Love your poems more and more dear Nosheen

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Akhtar Jawad 20 December 2016

In our corrupt society when we see a few men who are a little honest they look like stars of a dark night when there is no moon. I think this poem is a great metaphor.

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Barry Middleton 19 September 2016

Very lovely. I almost missed it. Yes darkness only makes a light shine more brightly.

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Edward Kofi Louis 16 September 2016

Yes! All is not lost. There is hope ahead. Nice work.

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Arfa Iman Kalera 13 September 2016

gr8 poem thanx 4 sharing 10+++++++++++++

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Abhimanyu Kumar.s 13 September 2016

Yeah exactly not all but alas we have lost

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Light does triumphs over darkness! That idea has been excellently expressed in this beautiful poem!

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Nosheen Irfan

Nosheen Irfan

Lahore, Pakistan
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