There's darkness, but not all is lost
The stars, the moon and the fireflies
Look how darkness helps them glow
Darkness, with its forbidding demeanor
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This is a poem of substance! I respect the core of this poem a lot. My pleasure revisiting this value laden piece! !
Be not afraid of the dark, O' my heart....great expression! I appreciate all your majestic poems. Keep it up!
It's another wonderful poem... adorable poetic expression...loved it
Optimism reflected in this beautiful poem is praiseworthy!
A concise and insightful bit of verse. A beautiful creation.
The stars, the moon and the fireflies/Look how darkness helps them glow....I feel a different kind of spark here! You have captured a magnificent theme! I admire and appreciate the choice of diction! A beautiful poem.....10
Amazing n beautiful contents........brings consolation n soothing effect to explore more
Nothing is lost in this world unless we accept that. Very good lines. Inspiring poem.
Feel the breath of sleeping air Such memories makes me feel so much... Thank-you!
Be not afraid of the dark, O' my heart Rather, feel the world's soul, deep inside Quiet descent of heavenly stillness, around Thoughtful, meaningful, spiritual, philosophical....all put in one in these lines...yes, darkness is not to be afraid of....rather darkness is the helper to seek the Light....excellent write...thank you
I agree we should not be afraid of the dark, it can be restorative. I have great memoires of walking with our dog in dark fields under starlight when everyone else was indoors. Enjoyed this poem Nosheen.
Light shines in darkness The fireflies, moon, stars forbidding demeanor of darkness, Be not afraid of the dark, O' my heart Rather, feel the world's soul, deep inside. Stillness, sleeping air, heart’s cries in prayer. You are growing everyday as a poet and as a master in Literature. Love your poems more and more dear Nosheen
In our corrupt society when we see a few men who are a little honest they look like stars of a dark night when there is no moon. I think this poem is a great metaphor.
Very lovely. I almost missed it. Yes darkness only makes a light shine more brightly.
Light does triumphs over darkness! That idea has been excellently expressed in this beautiful poem!
Lovely poem. Well done NI