Sunday, May 29, 2011

Not Afraid Comments

Rating: 4.4

When life is given
As soul bound to breath
No one birth for useless
You born with double senses
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Unwritten Soul
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Kumarmani Mahakul 09 October 2017

Oh dear, So why you afraid If strength you never awake Open your eyes, the door or life This life is your vision Remember to always remember You are master in your life No shadow shaped of others But you are, by yourself fix the shape originality ************************ Never afraid to be who you are Because when life was given to you You are born to be someone special.... Loved these lines. Here you have nicely inscribed on five senses that eyes love to caprure not ugly, ears hate bad sound not euphony, skin pleased to nice touch not pinch, and tongues prefer tasty not trashy. Beautiful poem with a courageous attitude having haunting expression. Thanks for sharing.10

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Christopher Tye 24 August 2016

Great poem, loved reading it. I know far to many people who limit themselves far to much when I can see a lot of potential in them.

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Edward Kofi Louis 25 July 2016

Listen to your heart beats! ! Thanks for sharing.

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Neela Nath Das 15 November 2012

Wonderful guideline.We should not be afraid of anything that can take our steps behind.

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Virginia Pecho Gely 23 December 2011

Fly as the birds, as yours words inspire, like me whose heart is aride for a lost love that will never return...Thank you Unwritten Soul. You are courageous to let your imaginations become words in a paper....This poem is fabulous. Virginia

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Rekha Mandagere 08 June 2011

They make you feel low They not stand high either They love to see you feel low Need you place them higher This attitude alone can take one to heights. The one who conquered his self is Fearless! All should read this great message to make the society ever smiling. What can we contribute to the society which gave us everything. Surely, we have to tread our life in the noble as said by young soul. Marks 10+++++

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