Thursday, August 1, 2013

Not Afraid Comments

Rating: 3.5

I came to the world
With a word in my palm
I trekked through this valley
Just to sow this word in wind's womb
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abbas abubakar
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Ramesh Rai 25 September 2013

A bold write. loved your thoughts.

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Jimmy Levi 01 August 2013

I really liked the poem overall. However, there is one error: If they would bring d sun to my heart, it would be awesome if you fixed that.

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