The needle sharp spikes can poke and puncture,
The subtle young skin, it entered quietly to adventure,
Below the blouse and on the stomach, crawling upward,
At The place of worship, where everyone was quiet and downward,
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A good write of understanding. I like the vision it painted for me.
Beautiful and heart warming. Wonderful end, leaving the reader with a smile Excellent poem
a great write and a humorous one if experienced good work 10-10
Like it, A fantastic poem,