Sunday, September 30, 2012

Not A Story! Comments

Rating: 5.0

The needle sharp spikes can poke and puncture,
The subtle young skin, it entered quietly to adventure,
Below the blouse and on the stomach, crawling upward,
At The place of worship, where everyone was quiet and downward,
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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi
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Dave Walker 05 October 2012

Like it, A fantastic poem,

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Chris Blazo 02 October 2012

A good write of understanding. I like the vision it painted for me.

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Hans Vr 01 October 2012

Beautiful and heart warming. Wonderful end, leaving the reader with a smile Excellent poem

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Robert Roberts 30 September 2012

a great write and a humorous one if experienced good work 10-10

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