Sunday, July 20, 2008

Not A Second Too Soon Comments

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So many times her heart had been broken,
The will to live was fading fast.
Reasons to smile somehow eluded her,
Thoughts of death had arrived at last.
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Loyd C Taylor Sr
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Sathyanarayana M V S 20 July 2008

Two things; broken love and timely help from God or rather God's mercy in timely intervention are interwoven so nicely to creat a very interesting narration in a very good format. Nice work my friend. keep going. sathya narayana

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True friends are special and rare. A lovely penning, to treasure, as friendship. t x

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Kesav Easwaran 20 July 2008

godly help and love comes in humanly disguise only...good write, loyd

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