Saturday, September 10, 2005

Not A Quilting Bee Comments

Rating: 5.0

I'm folding laundry in the sun
My neighbor says, 'That looks like fun'
And soon she brings her laundry out
Then other neighbors come about
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Velvet Thorn
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Oh Velvet...this is beyond cute...I'm inspired to go write one now.

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Mary Nagy 10 September 2005

I liked this very much. I love when somebody can write a fun poem about a not-so-fun task like laundry. Nicely done. sincerely, Mary

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Peter A. Crowther 10 September 2005

This poem seems hauntingly familiar as though I had read it before some place. Strange.

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Tears In Rain 10 September 2005

I can picture this quite well. Some neighborhoods are like that. I look forward to seeing more of your humourful creations.

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