Thursday, October 4, 2007

Not A Pretty Sight Comments

Rating: 4.3

A poem should be a pretty thing
Or that is what I once thought
Really a poem touches you
Where you are and where you are not
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Tom J. Mariani
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David Harris 22 October 2007

Tom, your humour might be classed by some as dry, but this one loves it. Keep putting the pen to paper my friend and I will keep reading. Top marks and thanks for sharing. David

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Barbara Haskell 10 October 2007

Love the last stanza! It makes me think of the last touch from a doctor who has given you bad news...

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Tom J. Mariani

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