Not A Poem(Me) Comments

you say this is you, which means that you are settling for this person you have become... are you really satisfied with you? ... if no, sculpt yourself to the person you want to see when you look in the mirror... release this bloddy demon, and let the pure goodness overwhelm what it is you feel now... it's there, inside.. but no one's ever said it'd be easy for it to come out. nicely written though.

You is you! , you should read my poem 'me is me' or 'to live' might help!