Tuesday, July 7, 2009

Not A Miracle... Comments

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I saw my latest grandchild yesterday
All lagoon eyes and fat little fingers
A perfect beauty in every way
What joy pure time, and chance can bring us.
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john coldwell
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Callie Carroll 07 July 2009

Your poem-a miracle. Thanks for helping me start this day with the thought of the 'lagoon eyes and fat fingers' of my grandchildren. Regards, Callie

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Patti Masterman 07 July 2009

There is so much in here to love.; 'No space, no time, no void, no law When pregnant nothing gave birth to everything The biggest bang you never saw' is pure music. It's a ten because that's the law down here but I'd like to give it much more.

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