Monday, December 2, 2019

Not A Limerick But Fun Comments

Rating: 5.0

A man got a thousand rupees note
While walking on highway,
He took lunch at five star hotel with gloat
Two thousand rupees his bill came,
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Kumarmani Mahakul
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Pushpendra Patel 08 June 2020

Limerick gives us fun but other poems also can give us fun. This poem is wonderful and it has meaning of fun for the readers.

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Mj Lemon 18 April 2020

Terrific humour, Kumarmani. A great verse!

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Kesav Easwaran 18 February 2020

Funny story. Enjoyed your poem. Thanks for sharing 10+

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Tom Allport 03 February 2020

Ha ha nothing is ever lost it just waits to be found? ...well penned.

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Biliiard Joseph 31 January 2020

Ha, ha, ha...you have made me smiling large with your interesting notable work. This is not a Limerick but a lovely fun giving poem.

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Bri Edwards 26 January 2020

well, i didn't follow the story completely i.e. i didn't understand all the parts [like washing belly under bush], BUT it seems the story ended well enough and those involved DID have " fun" , or seemed to. It is true that a poem needn't be a limerick to be funny. bri :) bri :)

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Unwritten Soul 10 January 2020

Its fun and its meaningful...btw im due to wish you and some of my friends here a great New year, wish the coming months and year give you more things to share and contribute as good people and pen do change others beautifully. Take care and have a nice weekend!

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Lyn Paul 15 December 2019

A beautiful and interesting light hearted write. Thank You

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Nice something about handkerchief worth of RS.2000/-,

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Indira Renganathan 07 December 2019

A good word play with 'not and knot'....as Aniruddhaji says there are naught and nought too...interesting poem thank you Kumar...thanks a lot for all your comments on my poems too...God bless you

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Indira Renganathan 07 December 2019

A fun poem need not be compulsorily a limerick....it could be like this poem too with a great fun...thank you

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Edward Kofi Louis 06 December 2019

" A star from sky fell on highway" ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Mahtab Bangalee 03 December 2019

Yeah there is fun without limericks done// fun after fun here life becomes undone//

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Aniruddha Pathak 03 December 2019

Beware, poets chasing limericks for fun, beware of a pointed gun, here is fun without limericks done,

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Mahtab Bangalee 03 December 2019

Yeah, Right you are Sir

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Susan Williams 02 December 2019

hahahahahahahahahahahahaha you had fun turning your imagination loose on this didn't you? definitely a fun read

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Kostas Lagos 02 December 2019

Witty and clever! Perfect

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Gajanan Mishra 02 December 2019

Great write, two thousand bill,

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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