Nostalgic Comments

Impressed by the images depicted in this poem. I see a lonely figure standing to view a loved one who travels to distances leaving a heart that cares. I see a face remembered and happiness shared between them is missed. Aside for a few 'spelling' errors and a word or two I'm not familiar with that I identify with the English language...I think this poem conveys its meaning and purpose. i like it. L

English is obviously not your native tongue and unfortunately your poem has lost something due to this. However, if you can iron out these little creases, I think it would be very good. Please email me if you would like me to help. Kind regards Gyp's