! ! Nostalgic Old Tales! ! ! Comments

Altruistic and benevolent thoughts. Enchanting piece.10 sathya narayana

I like your choice of words, 'wise perception of prime age' and 'amalgamate my old age'. Sounds like you deserve some peace and quiet and relish the silence in which you can stir your creative energies. I like the flavor of your poem.

this one is from the heart and shows deep reflection. in the twilight years of our lives, we still want to be independent and just peace. where else but in the lap of nature. rema this so touching and inspiring.10++ Mamta

Fine poems. Your soul shines from far... I wish good luck. Tsira

It is eternally true that ultimately Nature is the best resort for spiritual satisfaction or fulfilment in life! Wise decision!

There are a lot of interesting accents in this worthy poem. I like these two lines very much: ...At the most elegant mountains and a sun rise I can amalgamate my old age in a way I design...I just love them, will keep in my mind!

True that is the nostalgic old tales of the normal human beings- beautifully portrayed! Thanks for sharing!

accomplishments of a fine chapter untold for animosity but written with clear cut pragmatism...

hi Rema, i liked this poem. very deep in meanings and thought provoking.

Genius composed piece full of beautiful expression.....love it! ! ! 10+ keep'm coming Rema my friend stacks of dirty dishes Jon.

HI Rema Prasanna Great pen sketches on very important subject.'old age' Well pointed to the subject with intelligent selection of words. Good work A perfect 10 Greetings Satheesan rangorath

An emotional, beautiful, meaningful composition. cheers! !

The title of this piece is not adequate for its contents. These contents are essentially, ' The Final Requests of the Aged '. That would be my title, or something like it. Otherwise, the reader will be surprised. As I was, to find the most precious of treasures of the day. The lines were inspired and held together with a single thought. No greater tribute to prose can be expressed than this. I shall take this as a favorite and give a rare 10. Thank you for this masterpiece. A gift to everyone. GW62

A heart felt nostalgia of old age well told in your usual beautiful style of poetry.

Slight bitternness and sadness. Society has changed mentalities and children have often become the world's nomads and very acquisitive. It is a pity because the strong part of the eastern world was the strong family bonds where everybody had a place.

A well worded poem with good insight on life far sighted perfect...^10^