Nostalgia- Song Of The Expatriate Comments

Beautiful poem Zanyub. You have expressed very beautifully the pain and anguish you feel at foreign land. You feel alienated especially when you goto other place than homeland. Very soon we feel nostalgia of going home sweet home. Beautiful presentation and I can feel each words you portrayed very well. Loved it.

I like this way of writing, it makes me live that atmosphere.... and makes me feel that i am watching what i am reading. Well done..

greets me all the way here, very fine.

Pain and anguish of an expatriate well expressed. I can very well relate with this poem as a kashmiri pandit. Very touching indeed.

alienation is a great pain, makes one to feel rootless. touching write indeed.

A heart-felt, touching, and lovely poem. Brava! Zaynub!

A genuine stream of thought, flowing from an expatriate! A longing for homeland and its familiar surroundings is there embedded in everyman's psche! The twist at the end.... I liked much! If our 'individual brand' is accepted and respected, I think, every where we feel at home! Great write, Zaynub!

There is feeling of loss in the lines.Nothing is better than ones homeland.Beautifully done.Loved it.Pray your wish get fulfilled soon.Thanks for sharing.

It's an intense write showing the urge to go back to motherland and to recognize oneself after connecting with the mother tongue and soil what is missing in foreign. A nice realization of the root itself..... Loved it.

I can feel your emotional touch with your mother land which is very natural. Wish you all the best.

An ocean with dear mother land's name. Nicely penned with patriotic feeling. Great work on sharing.