With every flowing tear,
oozes the past.
With every breath,
Inquests morrow.
Forbidden memories,
Forlorn reminiscences,
forgotten joy,
unearthed sorrow.
beautiful piece...words so poetic.... it touched to the core conveys sadness and truthfullness in the feelings remembering memories though painful small piece but great enough to show the big/whole concept... 10+++++fro me...
small but perfect portrays well the feeling of nostalgia in us
Sadly throughout the nooks and crannies I feel... However you have potrayed well which lies within your heart, not all memories can be bad.... Enjoyed this feel you gave it, sort of wanting to move foward, but still are plagued with certain moments from your past....Very good Bonnie
A sad but truthful poem, the past isn't all a good part of your life. Short poems often leave us cold wanting more but this one says it all in few words. Good job
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Very good piece sometimes memories are hard to take..