(dedicated to Sr. Gabriel Gárcia Márquez, a great storyteller)
In your heart are the birds, the breeze, the flowers, the lamb, the sunshine
Much pleasure, then from thee, much more, must glow, must flow
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Something about the way this reads that lifts my heart and mind taking flight and glimpsing something new. I like these lines: And the rocks melt with the sun And I sunned it with smiles Alluring dreams voyage me
A great tribute to Gabriel Garcia Marquez, wonderfully scripted with good imagery and a smooth poetic flow...10
'....With things whose tunes are played out and forgotten Away from books, away from art, the day vanished The heart recognizes thee, alone, alone, alone! Where both deliberate, love is right, the light...' Yea...all right, vivid imagery = imagination used throughout. Interesting. Cheers. Subroto
To be honest, it is a bit lenghtly, but that is me..... I find it hard to keep treand of thought with poetry of length, however you did a very nice job none the less, the structure was very good, and a fine dedication...... Bonnie
Nice one, you did it again. Angelgreetings from Friesland Boomfriend Ruerd
GABO... Whom we know through his famous work Who wrote the story of a Shipwrecked Sailor. Here poet has brought a story teller live in the poem. This poem has revived the thoughts about the works of a great writer. Thank you.
Great dedication and Enigma's song felt throughout....a lot of thought and love the imagery. Well done indeed
Dear Siddiqui, It's an amazingly nice tribute to Garcia Marquez and of course Catrina Heart, the lyrical bird.I am particularly impressed by your use of imagery, lyrical presentation with broken lines to form a shape but never forgetting your zenith. i.e Nostalgia. Repeatition of few words has also created an alluring haze around the subject. 'Alluring dreams voyage me Through celestial love Reassure me Remember Chant of innocence story invigorate less memory Recollect me Remember Leaf of a sultry tree Behold blurry hope Reinforce me Remember'---These are the lines that draws my attention. A-10- -Rajkumar
Another wonderful tribute Ahmad, great imagery and flow in this poem, 10 Lynda xx
a great poem for Garcia Marques who is so close to the people hearts by his his beautiful writes..i admire him too as himself always he be a child with many dreams..well done
exceptional write, ahmad. good description of what most take for granted, thanx
'Sweet Love of youth' is the hub where nostalgia sprouts. Nice touchy poem. 10
very nice and appreciative.