Wednesday, April 15, 2009

Nostalgia Comments

Rating: 5.0

These hands
Are just the illusion
Of the wings…
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Tsira Gogeshvili
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Romeo Della Valle 01 May 2011

An excellent and well crafted write! A well deserved 10+++ Thanks for inspiring me and the whole world! Thanks also for sharing, Love and Peace for always1...

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Bert Bell 23 October 2010

What a marvelous poem you have written here, Tsira. Very lovely indeed.10+

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Nimal Dunuhinga 18 October 2010

Lol! You write beautifully Tsira! And I see you fly like a butterfly to a certain extent!

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Raju Baruah 24 April 2010

These hands Are just the illusion Of the wings… Magnificent writing...Your words embrace your feelings so profoundly...10+++

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Mukesh Raval 13 February 2010

wow, tsira, you play magic with the words....the last line is mesmerizing.

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 18 December 2009

Nostalgia is such a sad and beautiful thing that it nails everyone to the ground. You are a gifted poetess, Tsira...10/10. Naseer

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Lynda Robson 01 December 2009

A beautifully written poem Tsira, one of your best I think, 10 from me Lynda xx

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Rachel Butler 07 November 2009

'He Has nailed me to the ground' Rachel Ann Butler

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Ramin Chaman 16 October 2009

Hi Tsira.. About your poem... succinct. and readable..and a little heartsick.....10+

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Gary Witt 22 August 2009

Tsira: Powerful, haunting, and lyrical. Very well done. Thank you for sharing this. -G

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Subroto Chatterjee 13 August 2009

Nostalgia should make one soar too...Experienced that before? ? Cheers. Subroto

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Siddharth Singh 24 July 2009

intriguing poem, very well written.

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THW LAST THREE LINES FINISHED THE POEM VERY WELL......10

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Kesav Easwaran 02 June 2009

you beautifully weave in the idea inside your mind...yes; illusions are our only wings...thanks Tsira...10

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Ashraful Musaddeq 27 May 2009

'He Has nailed me, To the ground With nostalgia...' O the excellent lines if I could write! So lucid and so deep! ! 10+++

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Sonya Florentino 03 May 2009

but surely you can still fly... even with nail-scarred wings....

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Sandra Fowler 29 April 2009

Extraordinary imagery. You are in good poetic voice in this one. It is one of your very best, Tsira. Ten many times over. Love, Sandra

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Roland Bastien 27 April 2009

Glad to see you up there- in the air, lifted by the void.....beautyfull words

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still you have the mind to fly

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Kesav Easwaran 26 April 2009

yes; how would we leave this ground? excellent write... artful...10

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