These hands
Are just the illusion
Of the wings…
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What a marvelous poem you have written here, Tsira. Very lovely indeed.10+
Lol! You write beautifully Tsira! And I see you fly like a butterfly to a certain extent!
These hands Are just the illusion Of the wings… Magnificent writing...Your words embrace your feelings so profoundly...10+++
wow, tsira, you play magic with the words....the last line is mesmerizing.
Nostalgia is such a sad and beautiful thing that it nails everyone to the ground. You are a gifted poetess, Tsira...10/10. Naseer
A beautifully written poem Tsira, one of your best I think, 10 from me Lynda xx
Hi Tsira.. About your poem... succinct. and readable..and a little heartsick.....10+
Tsira: Powerful, haunting, and lyrical. Very well done. Thank you for sharing this. -G
Nostalgia should make one soar too...Experienced that before? ? Cheers. Subroto
THW LAST THREE LINES FINISHED THE POEM VERY WELL......10
you beautifully weave in the idea inside your mind...yes; illusions are our only wings...thanks Tsira...10
'He Has nailed me, To the ground With nostalgia...' O the excellent lines if I could write! So lucid and so deep! ! 10+++
but surely you can still fly... even with nail-scarred wings....
Extraordinary imagery. You are in good poetic voice in this one. It is one of your very best, Tsira. Ten many times over. Love, Sandra
Glad to see you up there- in the air, lifted by the void.....beautyfull words
yes; how would we leave this ground? excellent write... artful...10
An excellent and well crafted write! A well deserved 10+++ Thanks for inspiring me and the whole world! Thanks also for sharing, Love and Peace for always1...