The nostalgia of looking in
stills every other wish
save the expansion of self essence
that powers the beating heart
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Awesome poem. My poem creepy damsel could be of interest to you.
I can guess multiple of things based on this poem. Bottom line nice work mate.
What a deeply moving piece of poetry. So many underlying meanings. Well worded and meaningful. Thats life, slipping through our fingers. How the heart aches to think of the moments gone.
Wallowing in the padlock with just one question. Does the heart beat so we can breathe or vice versa? Good one, ric
My age is slipping from my hands nostalgia is inflating every day, at any moment I may be burst, I am a balloon of clay, but I can't turn out this uninvited guest, among all my friends nostalgia is the best, unlike me with the ageing it's increasing its charms, welcome nostalgia, come into my arms.
Thank you for inviting me to read your poem. I love the accompanying warm feelings that nostalgia brings. Magical moments are indeed memorable and one tends to linger in the magic.
I too rate nostalgia highly, remembering the vast hinterland of the past. It is a beautiful thing to say 'please' and 'thank you' to anyone who does us a favour. Very well written.
A laudible effort of self realisation. Thank you dear poet...10
Thank you for the invitation to read your poem - - as always I consider you a poet of merit with a great future.
Dear Sir Yoonoos, very emotional.. a wistful affection from the past.... thanks for sharing Sincerely, Diane
hi, i liked your words.... " The nostalgia of looking in stills every other wish save the expansion of self essence that powers the beating heart to breathe life in your shape of dust." it has a lot of insight, but sorry, i didn't understand the rest of the poem, it was too esoteric for me. cheerio carola
" save the expansion of self essence that powers the beating heart." A very insightful thought indeed!
A wonderful poem imbued with wisdom and insight. Very perceptive write with superb imagery. " That powers the beating heart to breathe life" A beautiful line from a beautiful poem.
Excellent choice of words. It really makes you slow down and consider what is being conveyed. Very bittersweet. Well done!
Wonderful composition. Beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing.
I read more than three times. Nostalgia gives me a joy and a rhythm with your refined words! Thanks for the good poem! Best wishes, Taewon
Our past memories are sometimes sweet, sometimes bitter. Whatever it is, it helps us evaluate the present and draw the future roadmap in a better way. In the poem, I love the expression, 'Save the expansion of self essence that powers the beating heart.'