Saturday, March 11, 2017

Nostalgia Comments

Rating: 3.5

Warm sand, soft beneath my feet,
dusk, purplish against a vast night sky.
A crescent moon alluring and shy,
watching waves tirelessly nudging the shore.
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Kwai Chee Low
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Cigeng Zhang 14 March 2017

We all have a small corner in mind kept for childhood, looking back with a naive smile.The last part o your poem is so nostlgic and sweet. I can imagine an aging face still wears a childlike smile when recalling the good old days.

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Kwai Chee Low 15 March 2017

Thank you, Cigeng. Indeed sweet memories are made of these.

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Ravi A 11 March 2017

Fine memories. Fine verses. Shadows waver and leave sigh - such lines are very poetical. Yes, when did we get so old?

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